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Cranberry Juice by ~lostandloveless:iconlostandloveless:

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I'm dreaming of a girl
with lips like
cranberry-juice-sipped-slow
over ice cubes in the summer
and sunlight in her eyes.

With hair as dark as midnight promises
and hands like blooming lilies
floating on the water.

I'm dreaming of a boy
with moonlight in his thoughts
and rivers in his words
stark against the silences
of greater things.

When we three will wander
down through buried hills
of steel and stone
and laugh, we laugh
at yellow-iron giraffes
tearing at the earth
with their metal mouths;
such gentle kisses man
bestows upon his mother.
©2007-2010 ~lostandloveless
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Author's Comments

I'm probably gonna scap this after a few people read it. Just wanted to show I'm not wasting my time. Suggestions?

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~LolaTheMusical Feb 25, 2007, 4:55:26 PM
I'm dreaming of a boy
with moonlight in his thoughts
and rivers in his words
stark against the silences
of greater things.

I like that. Keep writing. Stop touching.

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They won't let you borrow any of the art, but they get so mad when you sit down and start touching yourself there.
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~LolaTheMusical Feb 25, 2007, 4:56:00 PM
But, why did you post this twice?

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They won't let you borrow any of the art, but they get so mad when you sit down and start touching yourself there.
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~UmbilicalBlisters Feb 25, 2007, 5:28:27 PM
My suggestion would be to keep in, not scrap it.
but that's just me.

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Holy rising hemlines, Batman!
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~lostandloveless Feb 25, 2007, 9:05:13 PM
I had an accident with double clicking. I still don't know exactly what happened.

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I SPIT upon this mad, crazed world! I SPIT upon the Second Law of Thermodynamics!
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~lostandloveless Feb 25, 2007, 9:05:47 PM
Thank you. That's the plan.

I kinda wish I didn't know how.

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I SPIT upon this mad, crazed world! I SPIT upon the Second Law of Thermodynamics!
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~LolaTheMusical Feb 25, 2007, 9:20:11 PM
How to...

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They won't let you borrow any of the art, but they get so mad when you sit down and start touching yourself there.
:iconlostandloveless:
~lostandloveless Feb 26, 2007, 2:57:27 PM
Touch.

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I SPIT upon this mad, crazed world! I SPIT upon the Second Law of Thermodynamics!
:iconlolathemusical:
~LolaTheMusical Feb 26, 2007, 4:07:49 PM
Honestly? Hasn't it provided you some nights of happiness?

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They won't let you borrow any of the art, but they get so mad when you sit down and start touching yourself there.
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~DarkWingDucky Feb 27, 2007, 1:16:59 AM
i like it...it the sor of imagery i would dream of...maybe thats why?
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